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This deviation was nice. Short and sweet. But unfortunately too short. If you had made the story longer, though, it would be another story (no pun intended). Maybe if you added a backstory, maybe a mini-deviation of Steven getting captured by TR, getting turned into a Pikachu, him escaping TR's hideout, and so forth. You could also emphasize Steven's character. You could make an entire FF out of Steven because he's so versatile and original. I can see great things for this mini-FF, but you need to get more ideas from some more experienced deviator. Overall, it was a good job.
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