Daddy? Pt 2The next day, Ash awoke curled up next to his father. His father was still asleep, so he carefully climbed over his tail and toddled off towards the kitchen. As he entered the room, his stomach growled loudly. His mother heard him, and turned to him immediately. "Good morning Ash, you sound hungry." she said. Ash nodded, a blush spreading across his face. His mother set him down again, and placed a bowl of Pokémon food on the ground for him to eat. He happily gobbled it up. Steven eventually awoke, and Delia fed him as well. Then they all headed over to Oak's lab to get things sorted out.
This deviation was nice. Short and sweet. But unfortunately too short. If you had made the story longer, though, it would be another story (no pun intended). Maybe if you added a backstory, maybe a mini-deviation of Steven getting captured by TR, getting turned into a Pikachu, him escaping TR's hideout, and so forth. You could also emphasize Steven's character. You could make an entire FF out of Steven because he's so versatile and original. I can see great things for this mini-FF, but you need to get more ideas from some more experienced deviator. Overall, it was a good job.